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A cigarette in hand?
No, than why won’t these hands stop shaking?
How comes it’s getting harder to stand?
Please believe me when I say I’m not faking.

The lights they are becoming dimmer.
I can’t see, oh please can’t anyone hear me?
This light that once shined bright is becoming slimmer.
No, please don’t flee!

I only hear silence now.
There is no longer that loving bliss.
I no longer hear what was once said to me, that once solemn vow,
“I won’t leave you, this I promise you. I Love You.” that was than sealed with a kiss.

I fall to my knees.
I curse into the deep dark night.
As I look down into the deep sea,
A land of hopes and promises slowly fade out of sight.

I’m slowly falling into this hole.
Suddenly I’m left drifting in a sea of hate and lies.
It surrounds and engulfs my body and soul.
It’s all that’s left of a love that once shown in a lover’s eyes.

The water pulls me under and as I go down,
A single tear drop slowly rolls down my cheek about to fall into the sea.
As it engulfs my head I watch this lonely tear drop fall without a sound,
It was left to mix with the sea and what was left of me.
©2006-2009 ~attackpanther
:iconattackpanther:

Author's Comments

Yes i know..the title sounds harsh..i just wrote this up..its like 12:30 A.M. It says how im feeling in a way of a present situation.Oh and thanks Tony for helping me with advice and suggestions ^_^ :hug: enjoy..

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:iconwolfblood43512:
*dives in to save you* i wish i was on last night *hugs*

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the artist is not a different kind of person, but every person is a different kind of artist"
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:iconattackpanther:
*hugs*its ok..it happened like seriously AS u were gettin off...but i didnt wanna bother u with mentioning any of the such..so i wrote this poem:D i didnt go to sleep till 1:30..ugh *hugs tightly*

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Cause i dont know who i am, who i am without you
All i know is that i should
And i dont know if i could stand another hand upon you
All i know is that i should
Cause she will love you more then i could
She who dares to stand where i stood
:iconlostinmyworld:
that's a great poem!! :hug: ....sorry that you feel that way....:hug: i hope everything works out for you!!

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:iconlostinmyworld:
that's a great poem!! :hug: ....sorry that you feel that way....:hug: i hope everything works out for you!!

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:iconlostinmyworld:
that's a great poem!! :hug: ....sorry that you feel that way....:hug: i hope everything works out for you!!

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:iconlostinmyworld:
that's a great poem!! :hug: ....sorry that you feel that way....:hug: i hope everything works out for you!!

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:iconlostinmyworld:
CRAP!! SORRY!! it said it didn't send!! lmao..sorry!! :hug:

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:iconattackpanther:
lol *hugs* u just made me laugh so dont apologize!and thank you..it took me a lil to write it cuz i kept havin to tweek(sp) a line or something to make it sound right..so yeah..but i will be ok..eventually:D

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Cause i dont know who i am, who i am without you
All i know is that i should
And i dont know if i could stand another hand upon you
All i know is that i should
Cause she will love you more then i could
She who dares to stand where i stood
:iconrugar:
Wow...Very nice. You can tell you are getting better in your writing. I like the emotion...especially the vision it gives with the use of the sea.

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“Live as if you were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever.” -Mohandas K. Gandhi

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