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Stop and take a moment.
Rethink about what youíre doing
Your mouth is moving
But who do you think youíre fooling?

If itís a love, unlike all
The times before than surely, lass
This will be the one love test
That will be easy to pass.

You say youíre in love
And maybe itís true
Just listen to me,
Iím not trying to be cruel.

Love is what you feel when
You canít feel anything at all
And sometimes you have to be
The first one to fall.

Love is what it is like
To put your heart on the line
To risk it all and trust
That everything will end up fine.

Love is how your heart races
But stands still at the same time.
To love with all your heart
Is surely no crime

When I look in your eyes
There is no love I can find.
Oh, canít you see
That love just canít be blind?

Think of these facts
And in the end its your call
But can you honestly tell me
Youíre even in love at all?
Ok so I wrote this about a month ago but for some reason never posted it? I just touched up the last 4 line stanza but yeah so anyway this is basically about people & how easily they claim they are in love anymore. It is more so pointed at one friend inparticular along with another one but either way...

people need to realize that not every person they are with or meet can they say they're instantly in love with nor should they claim they are to everyone around them. It can really hurt a person in the long run, especially the one who is being told by someone else that they love them.

This goes out to all those people who need to take a step back and ask themselves "Is this really love or just me being in love with the thought of love?"

~thank you Carla for the assistance during a few brain farts of mine when writing this :hug:~
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pCShoCkr Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008
Oh WOW! I know this is an old post but I know EXACTLY where you're coming from here. I've seen too many of my friends go thru this and I myself have been there a couple of times. You get a :+fav: for this one in hopes to spread the knowledge and making people think before they act!!
:wave: Well Take Care and Thanks for posting this! =D
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attackpanther Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008
Aw wow thanks so much for the fave ^_^ it means sooo much to me. I am glad you enjoyed it...yes I can relate greatly...it is a very unfortunate thing that many people do anymore. They don't really think before acting and the word love loses all mean

Thanks and you take care too^_^
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pCShoCkr Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2008
You are most Welcome! =D :wave:
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lostinmyworld Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
Flo should read this. I am going to put this in my journal. promote it. promote you. i love it!! :heart:

and i love you of course. :heart: :hug: :glomp:
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attackpanther Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2007
You can go ahead and show that to him, I don't mind ^_^ and I agree on that too along with I am sure you know of a few other people who need to read this also..so many stupid people out there..lol

thank you sooooo much for the fave hun! it means more than yano and to put that in your journal! :glomp: thank you...maybe more people will read it and hopefully some who need to hear it and actually THINK!

awwwww i love you too and i mean that just as I know you do...we got a real love thing goin on here lmao *wink wink*
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lostinmyworld Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2007  Hobbyist Writer
heh...well i already explained i cant really....*sigh*..and he'd probably be like "yes i DO love you" ..bla...oh well...

that was the plan..hehe....and no problem. its a great poem. ^^

hahaha..yes...a real love thing. :XD: :glomp:
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CyanideAndCake Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
People just say it to fill air space now...It is so very sad.
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attackpanther Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2007
I know..people just need to friggin stop and realize what they could potentially do to someone else or themselves before they go saying/doing anything..geez people lol
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CyanideAndCake Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2007  Hobbyist General Artist
It makes me wish for a time when people still meant what they'd say.
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attackpanther Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2007
yes..the good old days..*sigh*
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