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I feel so unheard
I feel so unsaid
I feel so worthless
I feel so red

My face is burning,
I just want to scream.
You frustrate me so.
If i could only let you go.

But i know I cant
You know this too
Its why you take me for granite
And make me feel so used.

I dont think you're completely aware
Of all the things you do
But i wish somehow i could tell you,
Oh if you only knew...

If you only knew the way i feel.
If only you could feel it too
Than maybe you would try harder
And not always feel so blue.

I know you know im hurting.
You know you've hurt me so
I know that's why you push me away
And always tell me to go.

You don't want me to hurt
You don't want to see me cry
But you dont have the power
To really even try.

You want me to go
You want me to stay.
We keep going round and round
And now nothing is ok.

If you could only see it
The way I see it so clearly
If you only knew the man i knew
The man of yesterday.

I see the man that's locked away
The one that's deep inside.
I try so hard to help him
But only get pushed aside.

I don't know why you
Do the things you do
And neither do you
So I always look like a fool.

A fool for needing you so.
A fool for having faith
A fool for falling on my knees.
A forbidden love of desire.

I'll stay forever in love with you
But nothing for me will be alright
As long as you continue this way
And just give up this fight.

I feel so unheard
I feel so unsaid
I feel so worthless
I just feel dead.
You're not real and you cant save me
And somehow now you're everybody's fool...

You dont know how you've betray me...

just wrote this up..nothing else really needs to be said i guess
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Rugar Jan 11, 2008   Writer
*hugs back* :) thanks roogy
CyanideAndCake Jan 11, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
It says a lot.

it does..though I dont think it came out flowing very well but it is how i felt/feel. Thanks :) :hug:
CyanideAndCake Jan 12, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Feeling is often more important than how you make the words flow together.
that is very very true^_^
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